Question

15．越來(lái)越多汽車(chē)進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如塞車(chē)和車(chē)禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大地危害．作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎么做呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80詞左右）．
提示：1．遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn) （crosswalk）．
2．別在街道上或馬路上玩耍．
3．勸父母不能酒后駕車(chē)．
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With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．Don't play on the road，we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對(duì)交通安全說(shuō)說(shuō)看法和建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn) （crosswalk）．
2．別在街道上或馬路上玩耍．
3．勸父母不能酒后駕車(chē)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
obey rules 遵守規(guī)則
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
go across 穿過(guò)
【高分句型】
1．①With ②more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy③that it has greatly improved our life．
①with短語(yǔ)表伴隨．
②比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)，越來(lái)越…
③that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
2．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．【高分句型】But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．（總述，引出下文）
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．【高分句型】（遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn)）Don't play on the road，（別在街道上或馬路上玩耍）we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．（勸父母不能酒后駕車(chē)）
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用已學(xué)的語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和已掌握的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客觀(guān)事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力．為了提高書(shū)面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫(xiě)作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫(xiě)作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫(xiě)信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫(xiě)作的好方法．