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青奧會(huì)就要在南京舉辦了，作為南京市民的你應(yīng)該為這場(chǎng)盛會(huì)中作出哪些貢獻(xiàn)呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意書寫規(guī)范、表達(dá)清楚、語意連貫。

美化環(huán)境不亂扔垃圾，保持公共場(chǎng)所干凈整潔；

植樹種花，美化環(huán)境 ……

文明禮貌主動(dòng)向客人問好 ……

樂于助人向客人介紹南京的歷史文化，帶領(lǐng)客人賞美景，品美味 ……

其它……

Working for the Youth Olympic Games

Nanjing 2014 Youth Olympic Games will be held this summer. Many people are busy preparing for it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Working for the Youth Olympic Games

Nanjing 2014 Youth Olympic Games will be held this summer. Many people are busy preparing for it. We should try our best to help them.

Firstly, it’s important for everyone to live a green life. We should keep our city clean and beautiful. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Try to plant more trees and flowers.

Secondly, we should have good manners. When we meet our guests, we should say“hello”to them. We must learn to say “please”,“thank you”and so on.

Thirdly, try our best to help people in need. Nanjing is a beautiful city with a long history. There are many places of interest to visit. We can show our guests around them.

We can take our guests to taste some delicious food.

We are happy to do something useful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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