Question

11．假定你是李華，負責校英語俱樂部． 你們學校下周三晚上7點到9點將在5號樓藝術(shù)廳舉行英語演講比賽，請你寫一封郵件邀請外教 Ben 來當評委，內(nèi)容包括：
1．告知活動的時間地點：
2．邀請其擔任評委：
3．問詢是否有空
注意：1．詞數(shù) 80 左右；   
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear Ben，
I'm Li Hua，director of the School English Club．I'm writing toinvite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building．The speech will begin at 7 pm．a(chǎn)nd last for 2 hours．Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present．
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I'm writing to invite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building
我寫信邀請你作為一個英語演講比賽的評委將于下星期三晚上在五樓藝術(shù)廳．
高分句型二：
Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present．
你如果你可以告訴我嗎？如果您愿意出席，我們將感到非常榮幸．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Ben，
I'm Li Hua，director of the School English Club．I'm writing to invite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building（高分句型一）．The speech will begin at 7 pm．a(chǎn)nd last for 2 hours．Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
                                                
 Yours sincerely
                                                 Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．