Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Let’s face it. You are constantly exposed to common viruses. There is nothing you can do about them. However, you can greatly influence the effect of those viruses on your health. Don’t accept that the flu or common cold is something you have to suffer from time to time. Cast off this thought and keep yourself and your entire family healthy regardless of the weather or season. These 4 easy tips will help you to reduce the number of times you are down with the flu or common cold:

1.Eat plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables daily. They will provide you with important nutrients, mainly vitamins, which are needed to increase your ability to win the fight against common viruses.

2.Drink plenty of water. The water runs through your body, removing everything your body wants to get rid of.

3.Sleep 8 hours per night. If you often fail to have enough sleep, not only will you feel tired, but also your immune system will work less efficiently. You will be more easily affected by viruses.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

請(qǐng)你用英語以“健康的生活習(xí)慣讓我們遠(yuǎn)離病毒”為題寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1 以約30個(gè)詞概括以上短文的主要內(nèi)容。

2 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)養(yǎng)成健康生活習(xí)慣的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1) 病毒的危害及形成健康生活習(xí)慣的必要性；

(2) 要保持健康，還有哪些可行措施；

(3) 倡導(dǎo)大家培養(yǎng)良好生活習(xí)慣，健康生活。

【寫作要求】

1 作文中可使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Answer 1

【答案】

In our daily life, we may often be infected with different viruses; however, we can avoid them if we form good living habits, such as eating healthy food, drinking plenty of water, and so on.

As we know, viruses can cause diseases, which range from a slight cold to the murderous AIDS. To stay away from the harm of these viruses, it’s necessary for us to form healthy habits.

In addition to the four tips mentioned in the above passage, I think forming a habit of doing physical exercise regularly is also important. Physically, doing exercise strengthens our body and builds up our immunity. Besides, think positively and keep an optimistic view on our life situations. Our encouraging thoughts will bring the best out from our immune system.

In conclusion, we should lead a healthy lifestyle, holding a positive life attitude and doing sports regularly. All these habits will make us stronger and enable us to fight against viruses.

【解析】

試題分析：閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。寫作內(nèi)容：請(qǐng)你用英語以“健康的生活習(xí)慣讓我們遠(yuǎn)離病毒”為題寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：1 以約30個(gè)詞概括以上短文的主要內(nèi)容。2 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)養(yǎng)成健康生活習(xí)慣的看法，內(nèi)容包括：(1) 病毒的危害及形成健康生活習(xí)慣的必要性；(2) 要保持健康，還有哪些可行措施；(3) 倡導(dǎo)大家培養(yǎng)良好生活習(xí)慣，健康生活。寫作要求：1 作文中可使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

In our daily life, we may often be infected with different viruses;運(yùn)用了情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)；however, we can avoid them if we form good living habits, such as eating healthy food, drinking plenty of water, and so on.條件狀語從句在句中使用；As we know, viruses can cause diseases, which range from a slight cold to the murderous AIDS. As we know和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句在句中同時(shí)出現(xiàn)；To stay away from the harm of these viruses, it’s necessary for us to form healthy habits.動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語和動(dòng)詞不定式做真正的主語；In addition to the four tips mentioned in the above passage, I think forming a habit of doing physical exercise regularly is also important. Physically,賓語從句和動(dòng)名詞短語作主語完美結(jié)合；In conclusion, we should lead a healthy lifestyle, holding a positive life attitude and doing sports regularly.現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；另外，句中運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)詞組，however, In addition to，regularly，In conclusion，make us stronger and enable等，為文章增加了很多亮點(diǎn)。